Issue 1 page 5
Continuing the new style
Oh, and a small cameo of a familiar character. 
Originally, Erika was going to understand everything straight away. But after reading over the dialogue again I realised that probably wouldn't be the case for anyone, much less Erika...
Enjoy!
Your feedback would be highly appreciated. It takes just a few moments to give some and would make me feel so much better. if you did
Again: no disclaimers. Except for the small cameo.
Continuing the new style
Oh, and a small cameo of a familiar character. Originally, Erika was going to understand everything straight away. But after reading over the dialogue again I realised that probably wouldn't be the case for anyone, much less Erika...
Enjoy!
Your feedback would be highly appreciated. It takes just a few moments to give some and would make me feel so much better. if you didAgain: no disclaimers. Except for the small cameo.
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i bet he would be awesome to roleplayxD
It's looking good. I'm glad that there are starting to be panels. It's easier to follow
Nice job with storytelling, though there's a lot of text piled into this page.
Still, great job and I'll be looking out for the new pages!
I've been wondering where you've been.
I really like the panels too. Not only do they make everything easier to follow but they also help me put in some backdrops and the like.
After reading through it myself, I found out not even I could follow that wall of text properly. Henche Erika's reaction. But the next page will (hopefully) clarify things a bit better.
Thanks for your comment!
I really do appreciate it.
Something came up and required my full attention, that's why I've been quiet for a while. Everything should be back to normal here in a few days or weeks.
Looking forward to the next page